Review Detail of Yorth in Glory Seeker

I have a philosophy of always giving 5 stars, no matter the novel. As such don't think of my score as indicative of my feelings about this novel. It does have its weak points, and they are many. But there are things that it does well too. First of all the set-up. I think it was marvelously done. The scene was vivid, it had impact and hooked you right away. It also made use of powerful emotions to get through the barriers of the reader. When the character feel bad, you feel bad. When the character feel good, you feel good. That's something that takes a long time to teach. Now for the bad. The grammar, it's just so bad. Sentences that are cut midway, non capitalized first letters, so many things. Jist of it, read more books by good authors. You can check out some of the top-rated writers here at webnovel or maybe even sites like RoyalRoad and Scribblehub, you would find much higher quality products that would make you get used to a much higher standard of writing Anyway, good luck my friend. I hope to see you improve!