Review Detail of Rxel in Glory Seeker

As far as I can tell, the story is progressing nicely and the characters are developing as of Chapter 9. Readers can get a sense of the world building the author is writing. One thing to take note of is the use of '&' instead of 'and'. It makes the reading slightly jarring in the beginning. Also, sometimes I notice that you end the speech of someone with a full stop instead of a comma, or miss punctuation. Other than that, the use of capitals in the right place is especially important for reading smoothly. All in all, keep up the good work. Hope this helps! :)