Review Detail of Samayra_Akhtar in Glory Seeker

I have just finished the first chapter. The story is interesting. I have liked so far. But there are some punctuation errors and also capitalization errors. There are instances when you haven't use a 'full stop' at the end of a sentence. At most of the places your 'I' is in the lower case. Apart from these mistakes I have liked your story. I can understand... you are a new writer, so am I. We can only improve by some guidance. ALL THE BEST for your work.!!