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Music_addictLv45yr
2020-01-20 05:09

Overall I really loved it. Wished it was longer only for the fact that I love the smut. Good characters that didn't drastically change personalities after finding each other. Author-sama did well having made clearly built characters with interesting personalities.

Candle In The Wind

Destiny_Aitsuji
4.8
23 Chs

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heidicassius
heidicassiusLv2

Tbh this work has pretty much everything that the original manga lacked in comparison. What i love the most is how the author improved and polished the main characters and made them much more likeable i guess. Kudos to the author for this awesome work, i really love this one.

4yr

Destiny_Aitsuji
Destiny_AitsujiAuthor

Hello! I'm the author and this is my announcement ^^ If you liked the story a lot please feel free to check out my other works! In addition, I take on writing requests for my P@treons <3

4yr
Syndala
SyndalaLv11

This story is heavily inspired by the manga "A loveprize in viewfinder". And while the original story is really good, this author accomplished to make it even more to my taste. The characters of Asami and Akihito match the original to 80 and 95% respectivley. Akihito doesn't run away as much as he does in the original, so a real relationship can be developed. And Asami treats Akihito from the beginning more like he does in the middle of the manga. We skip all the rapey parts. So for me, this author cut out everything I didn't like about the manga and highlighted everything I loved about it. And as a bonus: Fei Long and Tao are also mentioned, and Fei Long plays a big role. So author, thank you for a very good read!

5yr
Silvia_Maria
Silvia_MariaLv3

Reveal spoiler

5yr
ShouGiichiLeBlanc
ShouGiichiLeBlancLv14

Holy Heavens!!! This story is awesome! Though... I prayed that there's a second part to this story...Thank you Author ^_^ ... ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓

3yr
Estonelle
EstonelleLv15

I've read the manga it's based upon and enjoyed it. I find that this book is an excellent omegaverse spin on it and have throughly enjoyed it along with the characters personalities. I reconmend. Not too dark and not too fluffy

3yr
Quentin_Pidon
Quentin_PidonLv15

Thank you for sharing such a nice story with us, I am happy to be able to count you among my 3 favorite authors. And the world you took me into is as surprising as it is confusing and I like it. Good job, success!

3yr
Kalon_Koi
Kalon_KoiLv13

just amazing and wonderfully written, true to the original work but also added it's own unique touch to the characters as they developed. makes me want to read over the original work again

3yr
Alienated9
Alienated9Lv4

I haven't read the original story, yet I still love how this story is well written. I found myself wanting more when it ended. Good job author

4yr
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