Review Detail of Special_snowflake in [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

So this story had a lot of potentials at the begining and it hit rockbottom.imagine Mc working workinc 3 years ro get 10 million points and then spend 6 million to get a gun (yes a gun)and another 2 million for cooking books because he cant wait 2 weeks t9 learn it from sunji.he couldve asked for a second devil fruit power but no cooking is better .also if u wonde what will happen if Garp went pirating with luffy this is your novel. The mc is a babysitter f or 99% of the story.