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Review Detail of ChallengeGod in [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

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ChallengeGod
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I'd say, at first this I thought this story had good potential even though the story development at first was a bit rough, I would say it was still good, But the moment I read chapter 6 or 7! I instantly got a pissed at how the so called "MAIN" Character just became a "SIDE" Character for the Original Character Luffy, I mean yeah the so called "Main" Character just wants to have fun and wants to have his own adventure, But what kind of fun and adventure does becoming a Side Character and squeezing in the adventure of Luffy have? Honestly I was disappointed in this since I've been reading alot of fanfics for a long time now and this is probably the first time I have ever read a "Main" Character becoming a "Side" Character. I'd say this is one of those novels that gives a good first impression but in the end leaves us with nothing but disappointment. But I have to admit, the later chapters were pretty good but reading those starting chapters made me have a bad impression. Don't think I'm angry or something since you can always do better in the later chapters and I'm just saying my opinion.

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[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

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Yeah...those early chapters were the work of a novice author...cough...me...cough.. I won’t be sidelining the mc the entire time the original mcs fight.