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Review Detail of cultivating_neet in [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

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cultivating_neet
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If you are an actual one piece fan and know anything about it do not waste your time reading this story. I can confidently declare that reading will make your brain turn into mush and fall out your ears, it's really that bad.

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[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

HaremQueen

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HaremQueen
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Hmm..I’d like to know exactly how reading this would make my brains turn to mush

HaremQueen
HaremQueenAuthorHaremQueen

I’m just asking you to state the reason(s) clearly so that potential readers can prepare themselves for what they are about to read. ;)

HaremQueen
HaremQueenAuthorHaremQueen

How are your brains feeling? After all, they must be all mushed up, right? Maybe that’s why you’re not replying to me. Beware potential readers, my novel is so bad that it’ll turn you into a vegetable for the rest of your life. XD

cultivating_neet
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bro **** off i leave a review on your **** novel and you spend your time doing this instead of improving your story

HaremQueen:How are your brains feeling? After all, they must be all mushed up, right? Maybe that’s why you’re not replying to me. Beware potential readers, my novel is so bad that it’ll turn you into a vegetable for the rest of your life. XD
HaremQueen
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My story is going just fine without you reading it.

cultivating_neet:bro **** off i leave a review on your **** novel and you spend your time doing this instead of improving your story
HaremQueen
HaremQueenAuthorHaremQueen

I guess you lied about your review. Your brain isn’t mush...how else could you possibly argue with me then?

cultivating_neet:bro **** off i leave a review on your **** novel and you spend your time doing this instead of improving your story
Werewolvking
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lol... you mad bro

HaremQueen:I guess you lied about your review. Your brain isn’t mush...how else could you possibly argue with me then?
13th_Night
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Hey, he call you BRO!!!!😱😱😱😱 You shouldn't make your Brother a vegetable the rest of his life. You are man!!!!

HaremQueen:I guess you lied about your review. Your brain isn’t mush...how else could you possibly argue with me then?
HaremQueen
HaremQueenAuthorHaremQueen

Not as mad as I was when that idiot made 3 reviews straight that only says a few words on repeat.

Werewolvking:lol... you mad bro