Review Detail of Werewolvking in [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

Item: [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime
Rating: 4.4

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WerewolvkingLv105yrWerewolvking

It’s pretty cool so far. It would have been sooo interesting if you made your own crew. Like if you trained regular people and gave them there own devil fruits. That would have been awesome. thats why I gave you a 4 on development. It was just kind of anti climactic when you chose to follow the straw hats.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

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HaremQueenAuthorHaremQueen

I know exactly what you mean. I was writing this story for fun and never planned to publish it, that’s why the first few chapters were so lackluster. I just decided to go through with the story that I wrote instead of changing everything.

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