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(This is my first review, so bare with any faults of mine that I may make, and please do point them out if there are any.) As of now, I believe the story is at a good point. To begin with, the grammar quality is well done and there are very few mistakes, if not any. The schedule is nice with three chapters coming out every week (and possibly extra if the author is so nice to do so). The plot of the story is relatively the same as the original so far (up to where Sanji will be recruited), but I expect it will be changing soon as both the MC and author have stated how they don't have the intention of sticking with the canon entirely (but will probably be stuck with until at least the grandline or maybe Arlong Park). The interactions between the characters are fun and believable as it doesn't feel forced in any way. Lastly, although there can be bit of an info dump on specific things of the world at some point, it's done in a way that's natural and clearly gives the exact details without being confusing. It's a nice fan-fic to read that doesn't make the events feel forced, and where the aspect of the MC being 'OP' at the start not make the story feel underwhelming. All in all, it may not be something everyone likes (obviously), but it's fun to read and see how the MC will deviate from the original timeline while also not being too passive about events (excluding those that are necessary to be kept the same) and taking action against possibly new enemies that the author may introduce in the future.

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[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

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Thank you for your kind evaluation.