Review Detail of Uesama in [ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime

Good job, with the writing style, i really like it !! 👍👍 And the most good part is mc not 'di*k for brain' type. I didn't mind if storylines same as canon with self-insert, Sugestion of mine make mc like treasures hunter, ruin explorer, informant etc when arive at some island, it can be adventures for mc only or with a companion, and use the system more like buying a book of martial art or anything. Anyways, so far you doing good, keep going !! 😁😁