Review Detail of WithJ in H.O.P.E

This is done as part of a review swap. The update speed seems pretty stable. This story is pretty much a typical university romance with the FL moving to a new school and gets into trouble/drama with the new clique at the school, finding new love interests, etc. There wasn’t much I could comment on as the story is still fairly new and there aren’t enough content for me to provide a more in-depth review of character, plot or world development. However, from what I’ve read so far, there are definitely a lot of room for improvement with respect to writing style and grammar. It was a bit difficult to read as I kept having to mentally change the tenses and awkward phrasing in the story. Despite the author asking to ignore the mistakes and grammar, I have to be honest and say that grammar is a huge part of a good story and can impact reader’s immersion. Therefore, I hope the author will seek improvements in this area. Good luck!