Review Detail of Chris_Cummings_5379 in Supreme Magus

This is a story that has the potential to be Great. there is just one problem, the idiot writing it. Most of the story is pretty decently written. When you get to any of the important matters, it's just one dumb decision after another just to make a certain situation happen to get to an end goal. the problem is the absolute potato writing to get there. All the inane everyday stuff he writes pretty well. Anything that takes even an iota of brain power is beyond him. it makes everything preceding the event based on stupid shit. Would be wildly different and better if written by a component person, or someone with even 1/3 of a brain