Decent story. The author is very confusing on how he wants this story to develop. I feel like he portrays Lith as this bad-ass character who loves his family and would do anything to protect them. But then his actions are quite weird at times. He’s so young in body and his thoughts are very mature for his age but then his actions are very childish despite his supposed maturity. Great storytelling but it’s giving me whiplash just reading this because of how contradictory his personality is at times.
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