Review Detail of NiallStephens in Supreme Magus

This is absolutely excellent. As a writer myself, I can't stop applauding the clever use of techniques like irony, perspective and best of all, the foreshadowing. Everything seems to have foundations somewhere earlier in the story (albeit I only just started paying for chapters so still a long way to go). But that's not even the best part, the best part is the characters. It's easy to tell how long the author spent with these people, fleshing out their desires and virtues and flaws, and it shines through in the work. Each one feels like a real person that I'm getting to know for the first time, and every action they take is authentic based on the arcs given to them. There are a few proofreading errors, but honestly, with this quality, who cares?