Review Detail of Randomguy791 in Supreme Magus
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Very good quality of writing. Not only well written but interesting. Only issues I have is that some situations are just too extreme. an example would be the relationship between lith and orpal. I understand that there is a need for an antagonist to move the story and that it is true how some people are just born arrogant and condescending towards everyone else but this just feels very forced to me. A second example would be between Lith and the noble he killed in the forest. They somehow meet up in the forest, get into a conflict, and noble+goons are dead. so either those situations truly does feel forced or its because i have seen those tropes used too many times in wuxia/xianxia novels that i now find it distasteful. Very good quality nonetheless and everything else was phenomenal. I do hope the quality stays that way because this is a very enjoyable read.
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I'm sorry that you found those parts distasteful, but they had a meaning to me. The brother was just an example of a person that had been consumed by poverty turning bad, and I mean really bad (stealing food from an infant is FUBAR, imo). Also the idea of a perferct family was too unrealistic for me. As for the noble, I specified that the white rabbits were precious and rare, and let's be honest, it's an historical truth that whoever had power killed or r*aped almost in broad daylight. When law has no or little power, life has no worth, even today.
True, I understand where you are coming from. All I can say is that people have different tastes and opinions. Aside from the two parts mentioned, I loved everything else though!
Legion20:I'm sorry that you found those parts distasteful, but they had a meaning to me. The brother was just an example of a person that had been consumed by poverty turning bad, and I mean really bad (stealing food from an infant is FUBAR, imo). Also the idea of a perferct family was too unrealistic for me. As for the noble, I specified that the white rabbits were precious and rare, and let's be honest, it's an historical truth that whoever had power killed or r*aped almost in broad daylight. When law has no or little power, life has no worth, even today.
Randomguy791:True, I understand where you are coming from. All I can say is that people have different tastes and opinions. Aside from the two parts mentioned, I loved everything else though!
with noble is true....idea of a perferct family was too unrealistic for me.....1OO percent acceptance for me
Legion20:I'm sorry that you found those parts distasteful, but they had a meaning to me. The brother was just an example of a person that had been consumed by poverty turning bad, and I mean really bad (stealing food from an infant is FUBAR, imo). Also the idea of a perferct family was too unrealistic for me. As for the noble, I specified that the white rabbits were precious and rare, and let's be honest, it's an historical truth that whoever had power killed or r*aped almost in broad daylight. When law has no or little power, life has no worth, even today.