Review Detail of Legion20 in Supreme Magus
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I am not planning on dropping it, unless life kicks me too hard, then I may be forced to take a break. Be warned, though, is not one of those novels action packed from the start, there is no harem, no constant stream of bullies nor endless violence. The start is all about devoloping the MC and his mindset. If all of this does not bother you, plz give it a go.
Eddicted:Are you sure you will not drop this because if you wont i will give it a shot(many idiots wrote magus novels here on impulse and later dropped them disappointing their readers).
Legion20:I am not planning on dropping it, unless life kicks me too hard, then I may be forced to take a break. Be warned, though, is not one of those novels action packed from the start, there is no harem, no constant stream of bullies nor endless violence. The start is all about devoloping the MC and his mindset. If all of this does not bother you, plz give it a go.
honestly, i still don't know. He came out of his first life a little too broken, and so far life hasn't been easy enough on him to give the time to heal. We'll see together :)
Just_a_person:Will he eventually find a love interest?
Is good, I actually read this in other websites and thought this was an official novel. I think I am addicted to this. There's some typo here and there (In the summary, I think 'achieve revenge' can be changed to avenge and 'with magic and mosters' you typo the monster). Quite fast-paced and simple, I like that. Also not many details and I have a bit difficulty in imagining the protagonist (and others) characteristics, keep changing from handsome to good-looking to average then back fort again đđđ Hopes you wont drop it. P.s. Can you add a little more in your summaries, there's some people that didn't bother to read because the summary simplicity
AxcZ:Is good, I actually read this in other websites and thought this was an official novel. I think I am addicted to this. There's some typo here and there (In the summary, I think 'achieve revenge' can be changed to avenge and 'with magic and mosters' you typo the monster). Quite fast-paced and simple, I like that. Also not many details and I have a bit difficulty in imagining the protagonist (and others) characteristics, keep changing from handsome to good-looking to average then back fort again đđđ Hopes you wont drop it. P.s. Can you add a little more in your summaries, there's some people that didn't bother to read because the summary simplicity
I need to reread it to make sure of it. đ Ch: Volume 2 Glossary Typo: 'to becomea' in Milea, Phloria, and Belia intro
Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
Ch: 1 Prologue Typo: - Derek, instead, took 'and' /an/ extra beating for not being /a/ man enough to face his own problem. -The choir of begging gave him the 'goose bumps.' /goosebumps/ -..., never 'were' disciplined enough,.... /u don't need 'were'/
Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
Ch: 2 Prologue (2) Typo: - Carl was all he had, his family, friend, and 'confident.' /confidant/ -His only real prospect was to cram 'as a' madman. /'as a' -> 'like a' is more suited in this sentence/ -Also they had an /a/ hard time figuring what being a normal **** -Derek and Carl would spend holydays /holidays/ -It could be his career 'making' commission. /'making' -> 'taking', making make it seem like it's was him that start commissioning to other than he take the commission for himself/
Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
fixed everything but the career making. afaik whenever you get an important job, is called as "career making", meaning that if you manage to do that well, you can get promoted/get other similarly important jobs
AxcZ:Ch: 2 Prologue (2) Typo: - Carl was all he had, his family, friend, and 'confident.' /confidant/ -His only real prospect was to cram 'as a' madman. /'as a' -> 'like a' is more suited in this sentence/ -Also they had an /a/ hard time figuring what being a normal **** -Derek and Carl would spend holydays /holidays/ -It could be his career 'making' commission. /'making' -> 'taking', making make it seem like it's was him that start commissioning to other than he take the commission for himself/
Oh, that's what you mean. P.s. I am too lazy writing right now, I will reread and write the other tomorrow.
Legion20:fixed everything but the career making. afaik whenever you get an important job, is called as "career making", meaning that if you manage to do that well, you can get promoted/get other similarly important jobs
I have to ask, why didnât you stay with the Alien Soldier plot?? Donât know why all the authors go to the cliche fantasy world and donât stay with some sci-fi/space opera...(there are several novels with the MC getting transferred/reborn into several worlds, but they always end in the fantasy one...)