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Review Detail of zelene_aleah in I'm Too Tired of Being OP, So I decided to Live a Carefree Life [BL]

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The background info is too much. Most of it gets straight pass by my head. I would suggest to add background info only when needed. Do not preset it. For example, when MC comes across a beast then please do describe it. Don't give all classification of different beasts beforehand. Please...

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I'm Too Tired of Being OP, So I decided to Live a Carefree Life [BL]

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