Good beginning. Keep it interesting if you start as baby. But please have general plot in mind for atleast the first score of chapters, like if you wanna save Uzumakis or lest them seal themselves and reappear, save the uchiha from the get go, and confront Indra to his mistakes and take on the ototusuki. You could also build an empire. But I guess going with original plot is better. Anyhow looking forward for the first(probably) Indian reincarnation fiction in Naruto.
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