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Review Detail of Taurus99 in Adventures of the Seven Deadly Sins in Naruto

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the character design and idea for the dark fire jutsu's are interesting but the combat needs more detail. The main character is getting stronger a bit to fast this will make it harder for you to continue the story unless you at least ad more strong characters to give the main character a challenge so it doesn't make the story less interesting.

Adventures of the Seven Deadly Sins in Naruto

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