Review Detail of Kritiko in Journey Towards Greatness

Item: Journey Towards Greatness
Rating: 2

Review detail

KritikoLv105yrKritiko

The synopsis is exciting, and being a reincarnated grandpa that likes pokemon is new to me which then garnered my attention in reading it. But, jokes aside, the writing style and grammar, for me, is a bit on the low end of my expectation almost conparing to a highschool literature work 2.0 version. Last but not the least, the author needs an editor(seriously recomended). The pronoun usage sucks. Honestly, I find it amusing for getting good reviews. I can only wonder.

Journey Towards Greatness

Evil_God_ZARAKH

Liked by 61 people

Replies4

Dregon_KotikLv1Dregon_Kotik

Tough and beautiful criticism. Beautiful - this is because there is no obscene language. Someone had to say this, and I will. Yes my grammar is .... uhh No comments

Kritiko:I don't have all the time of the day to spend reading something mediocre

3yr

jes1e1Lv13jes1e1

Ehh, its not the best but it is readable. this is not even that bad 😐 stop acting like you can’t read it

3yr

KritikoLv10Kritiko

I don't have all the time of the day to spend reading something mediocre

jes1e1:Ehh, its not the best but it is readable. this is not even that bad 😐 stop acting like you can’t read it

3yr

LordHollowLv12LordHollow

That’s what I’ve been thinking the grammar and the story is horrible it’s like it comes from a child that got hard from every female in Pokémon it hurts to read and had a lot of potential but couldn’t continue. Everyone gives such good reviews but I can’t see it

2yr