Review Detail of Kritiko in Journey Towards Greatness

Item: Journey Towards Greatness
Rating: 2

Review detail

KritikoLv105yrKritiko

The synopsis is exciting, and being a reincarnated grandpa that likes pokemon is new to me which then garnered my attention in reading it. But, jokes aside, the writing style and grammar, for me, is a bit on the low end of my expectation almost conparing to a highschool literature work 2.0 version. Last but not the least, the author needs an editor(seriously recomended). The pronoun usage sucks. Honestly, I find it amusing for getting good reviews. I can only wonder.

Journey Towards Greatness

Evil_God_ZARAKH

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Replies4

jes1e1Lv13jes1e1

Ehh, its not the best but it is readable. this is not even that bad 😐 stop acting like you can’t read it

3yr

KritikoLv10Kritiko

I don't have all the time of the day to spend reading something mediocre

jes1e1:Ehh, its not the best but it is readable. this is not even that bad 😐 stop acting like you can’t read it

3yr

Dregon_KotikLv1Dregon_Kotik

Tough and beautiful criticism. Beautiful - this is because there is no obscene language. Someone had to say this, and I will. Yes my grammar is .... uhh No comments

Kritiko:I don't have all the time of the day to spend reading something mediocre

2yr

LordHollowLv12LordHollow

That’s what I’ve been thinking the grammar and the story is horrible it’s like it comes from a child that got hard from every female in Pokémon it hurts to read and had a lot of potential but couldn’t continue. Everyone gives such good reviews but I can’t see it

2yr