Review Detail of afire190 in Journey Towards Greatness

The writing quality of this work is horrendous. This is obvious from the synopsis, which is a giant run on sentence rife with grammatical errors, but is also apparent in the chapters themselves. Furthermore, the chapters are written in a script format not appropriate for a novel/webnovel. Even if a story has an amazing plot, it is completely unreadable if the writing quality is abysmal. While I cannot remark on the fields besides writing quality, they are irreverent with writing quality at this level. This story badly needs significant edition.