Review Detail of DarkPhoenix77 in The Rise of Xueyue
Review detail
I read this story before it was updated and I like the new story much better. The characters are more complex and make more sense. The FL Xueyue has been betrayed by her so-called family and left for dead. She was rescued by Duke Li's family and gets adopted. She learns to show emotions to her new family and trusting them. Her 2 adopted twins brothers are overly protective of her and provides humor for the story. Wen Jenkai seems to be the ML who is the Commanders for the empire has become obsessed with Xueyue but does not know how to love. His father hate him for his wife deaths due to his birth. Jenkai doesn't believe in love which goes against our FL belief that she won't marry without love. It's going to be a clash of will can't wait to see who wins in the end. However, there is another potential ML, a Commander from another country coming to the empire for peace exchange. Now we have 2 Commanders of their countries fighting for the FL. I am super excited to read more about our FL rise to power and love.
The Rise of Xueyue
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omg... after I read your comment I went ahead n skimmed last few chaps... Can you PLEASE PLEASE tell me what will happen to Wen Jiakai at the end???? I have not yet actually reached the part where peace marriage starts, but somehow I feel heartbroken n I'm not able to proceed.. uff...
Bookworm_123:i first thought the ml is Wen Jinkai but i mistook it it's actually Yu Zhen the fl will end up with
Actually the FL gave Wen Jinkai so many chances and even told him she do likes him to and she wanted to be with him and marry him but he didn't know what he wants. he was to confused because the Fal looks exactly like his dead ex gf and it saddens him when he thinks of his ex that's why when he saw the FL's face and got to know her the only reason he befriends her was because so he can soften up his pain cuz he can be next to her and see her face which looks so similiar and the face and pain he tried to heal so many years. So FL gave him time and he often just let her left on one side but he didn't reject her, he just gave her the idea like "yeah i like you to but i'm not ready for a marriage with you and sharing a lifetime with you", which saddens the FL a lot. I only know that when Wen Jinkai found out she stared having feelings for another man which is the ML, Wen Jinkai got upset and he didnt want to part with her which he than realize he wanted to share a life with her but it was to late, so he got upset and wanted to have a sword to sword fight with ML (which i haven't read that part yet so idk what happened after that if Wen Jinkai died after the sword fighting or got injured or etc so i can't tell)
impatientreader123:omg... after I read your comment I went ahead n skimmed last few chaps... Can you PLEASE PLEASE tell me what will happen to Wen Jiakai at the end???? I have not yet actually reached the part where peace marriage starts, but somehow I feel heartbroken n I'm not able to proceed.. uff...
uhhuhh.... thanks for explaining.. i just couldn't read ahead, but now maybe I will start again...[img=recommend]
Bookworm_123:Actually the FL gave Wen Jinkai so many chances and even told him she do likes him to and she wanted to be with him and marry him but he didn't know what he wants. he was to confused because the Fal looks exactly like his dead ex gf and it saddens him when he thinks of his ex that's why when he saw the FL's face and got to know her the only reason he befriends her was because so he can soften up his pain cuz he can be next to her and see her face which looks so similiar and the face and pain he tried to heal so many years. So FL gave him time and he often just let her left on one side but he didn't reject her, he just gave her the idea like "yeah i like you to but i'm not ready for a marriage with you and sharing a lifetime with you", which saddens the FL a lot. I only know that when Wen Jinkai found out she stared having feelings for another man which is the ML, Wen Jinkai got upset and he didnt want to part with her which he than realize he wanted to share a life with her but it was to late, so he got upset and wanted to have a sword to sword fight with ML (which i haven't read that part yet so idk what happened after that if Wen Jinkai died after the sword fighting or got injured or etc so i can't tell)