This review is part of a review swap and is valid as of chapter 10. By chapter ten we're still experiencing the extreme beginning of a second chance story. At least that's what I believe. I can't know for certain, because it's that early in the story. There are a few minor language errors, and I mean minor. It's difficult to write a review when my only thought is: Wow! I'll give my impressions under the stars section, and here they come. Writing: Five stars. Close to flawless. Updates: I'll just write five stars. Ten chapters is honestly not enough for assessing the stability of updates. Story: Five stars. A minor hiccup during the first two chapters, and after that superb pacing. Characters: Five stars. The reader experience the characters. If not directly then from the eyes of others. This way they come to life, because other characters live their own surroundings. World: Five stars. Again the world is experienced by the characters. I could, possibly, nitpick about a few passages of exposition, but even the sun has dark spots. Lastly, I'm in awe. If you've read my other reviews you should know that I don't hand out all five star reviews very often. This goes directly into my library.
Xincerely
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