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A_Y_A_HLv55yr
2019-02-21 23:57

I'm not really good at giving reviews although I've been here in WN for quiet a long time now this is just my 3rd time giving reviews along side of queen Lyn and the rest of my life is for you . so hope u like it . All I can say is I really like the plot line , its new and refreshing . not like those some other novel that is all about CEO so find it quiet unique . ๐Ÿ˜ update stability is so ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿพ . although there is still need some improvement over all I really like it . ๐Ÿ˜Š I wish you good luck and I hope that our support for you is enough to keep you motivated in your writing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ we will always support you . fighting โœŠโœŠโœŠ (Haruka-kun) I think I'm fallen for you even though they call you a little jerk . your still so handsome ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.

Dream Star

XOMatsumaeohana
4.6
803 Chs

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Thank you for the support ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘

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So I'm going to warn everyone first. The first chapter is 10K, it's really long. Around 80 or so pages on the mobile version. It's much easier to read the 1st chapter on the web version. ๐Ÿ˜… I'm really sorry about the length of the first chapter, I wasn't aware of the length of chapters posted on WN and I haven't posted any of my stories online in so many years. Pretty nervous about this too ๐Ÿค” so it's a test run. If people do like it, I'll continue. I hope you all enjoy and don't hesitate to point out mistakes in my clumsy writing.

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I finally read some chapter! My bored and sick mind cannot stay still so I read this piece of masterpiece. Writing Quality is great for an ******* writer. I gave it 4.8 only because you need to have room for growth. Heck, I'll give J.K. Rowling a 4.8 so she can also improve... not like she needs more improvement but you get my point, right? Stability of Updates is great. I always receive notifications where ever there is one, and I saw it happening every day so you can expect the author will deliver. Story Development is best. Someone called the author a person with the second male lead syndrome and I can see why now. LOL. There is more to the story than your first expectation. Character Design is a fun part of every novel. I like Lila's character best and not because she is the main character, but because she is relatable. For world background, I gave 5 stars because I love the story all in all. I will read the rest soon. Gambatte, Author-san!

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The legendary, level six sensei that I see everywhere in the comments has a book? Iโ€™m *shook* ๐Ÿ˜œ No worries sensei. Added to my library and will do a proper review very soon ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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Oh wow! Queen has a novel now? Definitely will take a look! .................................................................................................................................

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A great novel. Update stability is great, already so many chapters in the first week. The storyline is very interesting, there's a mixture of several genres in the novel and the characters thoughts are well expressed. The authors writing style keeps getting better too, and I can tell that she puts in effort with her editing. Keep up the good work.

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Review Valid Till Chapter 117 Writing Quality: I'm impressed how much better it's gotten since she first started. Could still use some work but the errors are less frequent now. The author is really trying hard. Stability of Updates: If your tired of a slow updates then I recommend you read this, the update time is everyday, more than one chapter too. Character design and story development: While some may think the beginning is puzzling, it's quite easy to see where the story is going from prologue 1 and the synopsis. The characters are very well developed, we get a insight into the key characters thoughts a lot and their background stories are slowly unveiled during the course of the story. I like how the author doesn't solely emphasis the ML. The focus on the second ML is really interesting. I've never seen a novel that does it and it works quite well with the current pace, events of the story. Overall, I'm really looking forward to seeing where the rest of the story ends up. Keep up the good work.

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Are you tired of novels with unstable releases? Do you just want something refreshing to read? Do you want a novel that has proper grammar? Well, look no further, because you have found your perfect novel. Join Lila in her adventure to achieve her dream. Also, if anyone reads this review, please tell me how you found this novel. I'm curious since I know tons of people have found this novel after clicking on the extremely well-known, webnovel famous XOMatsumeaohana's profile. Hehehe.

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