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XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor5yr
2019-01-20 09:20

So I'm going to warn everyone first. The first chapter is 10K, it's really long. Around 80 or so pages on the mobile version. It's much easier to read the 1st chapter on the web version. ๐Ÿ˜… I'm really sorry about the length of the first chapter, I wasn't aware of the length of chapters posted on WN and I haven't posted any of my stories online in so many years. Pretty nervous about this too ๐Ÿค” so it's a test run. If people do like it, I'll continue. I hope you all enjoy and don't hesitate to point out mistakes in my clumsy writing.

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yicey
yiceyLv10

Can't believe you have a novel. Must be nerve wracking and really brave of you to put the novel up. Will read and criticize appropriately.

XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

Yeah. This was a pretty risky move, I'm not the best writer either and there will be grammar mistakes. But ~ I do my best with my edits for mistakes, so the overall flow of the story should still be there ๐Ÿ˜† Please do ~ !

yicey:Can't believe you have a novel. Must be nerve wracking and really brave of you to put the novel up. Will read and criticize appropriately.
_moonlight
_moonlightLv5

OMG 10K ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ That's like 10 average chapters. Nice story though.

EmeraldAsh
EmeraldAshLv4

Writing a story is pretty nerve wracking the first time and doesn't get any easier with time. I still haven't gotten the courage to put up my story in front of others.I really admire and respect you for putting yourself out like this. I'll definitely check out your story....

XOMatsumaeohana:Yeah. This was a pretty risky move, I'm not the best writer either and there will be grammar mistakes. But ~ I do my best with my edits for mistakes, so the overall flow of the story should still be there ๐Ÿ˜† Please do ~ !
XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

๐Ÿ˜ I split it (6 prologue) and 1st chapter, so it should be okay to read now ~

_moonlight:OMG 10K ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ That's like 10 average chapters. Nice story though.
XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

๐Ÿ˜… This isn't the first time for me. But well I haven't posted my stories online in a very long time, so I suppose it's more or less the same. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ’ช Fighting, you can do it too! I'll read once you post ๐Ÿ˜†

EmeraldAsh:Writing a story is pretty nerve wracking the first time and doesn't get any easier with time. I still haven't gotten the courage to put up my story in front of others.I really admire and respect you for putting yourself out like this. I'll definitely check out your story....
Nova30
Nova30Lv5

I'm excited to read this book๐Ÿ˜. Thanks for your hard work Author-san.

amkzs
amkzsLv4

I read the novels you recommended in your comments and none of them disappoint. Im pretty sure your own work will be also be a bang! Good luck! Will be supporting this.

XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

๐Ÿ˜… Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š but (*๊’ฆเบดโŒ“๊’ฆเบต) I know I'm not the best writer, so feel free to point out the mistakes and once you've read a bit. To leave a proper review too ~

amkzs:I read the novels you recommended in your comments and none of them disappoint. Im pretty sure your own work will be also be a bang! Good luck! Will be supporting this.
XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

I hope you enjoy the story ~ looking forward to reading your thoughts on the comments or a review ๐Ÿ˜Š

Nova30:I'm excited to read this book๐Ÿ˜. Thanks for your hard work Author-san.
luo_
luo_Lv5

O0F-- I WAS ALREADY HOOKED BY THE SUMMARY THEN I SCROLLED THROUGH THE COMMENTS SECTION AND GOT EVEN JUNGSHOOKED TO THE POINT MY MIND BLANKED OUT๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I DIDNT EXPECT THE AUTHOR TO BE SOMEONE I WOULD KNOW ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ GOOD JOB FOR THIS NOVEL XOMatsumaeohana

HyAhCiNth
HyAhCiNthLv11

Omg!!!you have a novel..ill definitely read this one.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜

XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘‹ Hello there fellow FMHM fan, I hope you enjoy my story, leave comments, a review and spare a power stone if you enjoy it ๐Ÿ˜Š

luo_:O0F-- I WAS ALREADY HOOKED BY THE SUMMARY THEN I SCROLLED THROUGH THE COMMENTS SECTION AND GOT EVEN JUNGSHOOKED TO THE POINT MY MIND BLANKED OUT๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I DIDNT EXPECT THE AUTHOR TO BE SOMEONE I WOULD KNOW ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ GOOD JOB FOR THIS NOVEL XOMatsumaeohana
luo_
luo_Lv5

YASSS๐Ÿ˜‚ I'LL DEFINITELY WILL๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ IM CURRENTLY LIKING IT SO FAR

XOMatsumaeohana:๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ‘‹ Hello there fellow FMHM fan, I hope you enjoy my story, leave comments, a review and spare a power stone if you enjoy it ๐Ÿ˜Š
En_yulie
En_yulieLv10

Found u almost in every novel i read๐Ÿ˜‚ and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...

En_yulie
En_yulieLv10

Found u almost in every novel i read๐Ÿ˜‚ and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...

XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

๐Ÿ˜† another person with a good taste in novels then ~ hope you enjoy the novel. Hope to see your comments and maybe a review when you've read enough.

En_yulie:Found u almost in every novel i read๐Ÿ˜‚ and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...
Smiillleeee
SmiillleeeeLv5

Author author LV6 that's what I saw first Then I noticed your name Saw your badges And finally came across your novel Well I like the synopsis And I prefer long chapters therefore I've added this novel in my library I'll give it a chance first and then give a proper reviewโ™ฅ

MilordInk
MilordInkLv13

...... Dang. That's amazing. 10k? *takes in a deep breath* for a single chapter? How long are the other chapters? Or did you split them up, like 'I'm a Reader' (1), then (2), and so on? I'm curious.

XOMatsumaeohana
XOMatsumaeohanaAuthor

I split it, so the long 10K chapter is the prologue and the 1st chapter. The other chapters in the novel are in between 900-1.5K words. Sometimes there's a 2K one but rarely.

MilordInk:...... Dang. That's amazing. 10k? *takes in a deep breath* for a single chapter? How long are the other chapters? Or did you split them up, like 'I'm a Reader' (1), then (2), and so on? I'm curious.
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