So I'm going to warn everyone first. The first chapter is 10K, it's really long. Around 80 or so pages on the mobile version. It's much easier to read the 1st chapter on the web version. ๐ I'm really sorry about the length of the first chapter, I wasn't aware of the length of chapters posted on WN and I haven't posted any of my stories online in so many years. Pretty nervous about this too ๐ค so it's a test run. If people do like it, I'll continue. I hope you all enjoy and don't hesitate to point out mistakes in my clumsy writing.
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LIKEYeah. This was a pretty risky move, I'm not the best writer either and there will be grammar mistakes. But ~ I do my best with my edits for mistakes, so the overall flow of the story should still be there ๐ Please do ~ !
yicey:Can't believe you have a novel. Must be nerve wracking and really brave of you to put the novel up. Will read and criticize appropriately.
Writing a story is pretty nerve wracking the first time and doesn't get any easier with time. I still haven't gotten the courage to put up my story in front of others.I really admire and respect you for putting yourself out like this. I'll definitely check out your story....
XOMatsumaeohana:Yeah. This was a pretty risky move, I'm not the best writer either and there will be grammar mistakes. But ~ I do my best with my edits for mistakes, so the overall flow of the story should still be there ๐ Please do ~ !
๐ This isn't the first time for me. But well I haven't posted my stories online in a very long time, so I suppose it's more or less the same. ๐ฒ๐ช Fighting, you can do it too! I'll read once you post ๐
EmeraldAsh:Writing a story is pretty nerve wracking the first time and doesn't get any easier with time. I still haven't gotten the courage to put up my story in front of others.I really admire and respect you for putting yourself out like this. I'll definitely check out your story....
๐ Thank you ๐ but (*๊ฆเบดโ๊ฆเบต) I know I'm not the best writer, so feel free to point out the mistakes and once you've read a bit. To leave a proper review too ~
amkzs:I read the novels you recommended in your comments and none of them disappoint. Im pretty sure your own work will be also be a bang! Good luck! Will be supporting this.
๐๐๐๐ Hello there fellow FMHM fan, I hope you enjoy my story, leave comments, a review and spare a power stone if you enjoy it ๐
luo_:O0F-- I WAS ALREADY HOOKED BY THE SUMMARY THEN I SCROLLED THROUGH THE COMMENTS SECTION AND GOT EVEN JUNGSHOOKED TO THE POINT MY MIND BLANKED OUT๐๐ I DIDNT EXPECT THE AUTHOR TO BE SOMEONE I WOULD KNOW ๐๐ GOOD JOB FOR THIS NOVEL XOMatsumaeohana
๐ another person with a good taste in novels then ~ hope you enjoy the novel. Hope to see your comments and maybe a review when you've read enough.
En_yulie:Found u almost in every novel i read๐ and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...
I split it, so the long 10K chapter is the prologue and the 1st chapter. The other chapters in the novel are in between 900-1.5K words. Sometimes there's a 2K one but rarely.
MilordInk:...... Dang. That's amazing. 10k? *takes in a deep breath* for a single chapter? How long are the other chapters? Or did you split them up, like 'I'm a Reader' (1), then (2), and so on? I'm curious.