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undyinginmortall11
undyinginmortall11Lv145yr
2019-02-27 02:28

This novel only hase one flaw what bot really can be cald a flaw I say this because evry thing in this novel i think is awsome and i really hope he wil chance te plot. But de release date is low bit if you can look over that problem this is one of the best fanfic put there

Reborn as the Flash's Twin Brother

eric69
4.2
41 Chs

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ZerSpectre
ZerSpectreLv14

Finally man a person who write about my favorite super hero, man you should not drop this, its an awesome novel, with a great development, it has potential, and about the options i choose the second one. Cheers mate keep up the good work

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Aduck
AduckLv5

Reveal spoiler

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KingConner
KingConnerLv15

looking forward to the the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................. ............................................ ...................... ............ .... .

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Monkeynightd
MonkeynightdLv15

No harem supergirl it just sounds better and besides she needs some love cause of all the mess in the show and the one guy leaves her so yea aupergirl and the phantom

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AllornicGod
AllornicGodLv5

Really I think that you need to slowly down the pace and make sure he doesn't grow too large to quickly So that you can slowly devolop the character and love interests .have him find out more on his power and original ways to use like mabye speeding up his heart rate to increase oxygen flow into his head and gain a adrenaline beserk state.use your head to do creative things and have him interact with Barry as the phantom mabye train him up a little as your the senior speedster.

5yr
ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!! it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!

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CipherStorm
CipherStormLv4

man please 😭😭😭🥺🙏🥺 🥺🙏🥺🥺🙏 update more chapters I can't wait anymore it's such a awesome story please update it man

4yr
ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

Author Please Increase the release pace increase the release. more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,more release,

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Azazel_69
Azazel_69Lv3

Are you dropping this please dont its a good story please dont drop this story. .

3yr
ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

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