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AllornicGod
AllornicGodLv55yr
2019-02-03 16:40

Really I think that you need to slowly down the pace and make sure he doesn't grow too large to quickly So that you can slowly devolop the character and love interests .have him find out more on his power and original ways to use like mabye speeding up his heart rate to increase oxygen flow into his head and gain a adrenaline beserk state.use your head to do creative things and have him interact with Barry as the phantom mabye train him up a little as your the senior speedster.

Reborn as the Flash's Twin Brother

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ZerSpectre
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Finally man a person who write about my favorite super hero, man you should not drop this, its an awesome novel, with a great development, it has potential, and about the options i choose the second one. Cheers mate keep up the good work

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No harem supergirl it just sounds better and besides she needs some love cause of all the mess in the show and the one guy leaves her so yea aupergirl and the phantom

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it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!! it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!it was one of my favourite fanfic but sadly the author dropped it saying because of school, ha!!!

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