Its a good story. The only problem is that I actually read the oroginal trilogy of Monster Girl Quest. Therefore, I cant help but notice that about 80% of the story is a huge copy-paste of the original work. It was a fun read nonetheless, but the author stays too linear. You should have written your own story instead of following the original script. People who never played the game will enjoy this, but those who know about MGQ will have mixed feelings.
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