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SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardLv116yr
2019-02-16 06:27

If you are a fan of litrpg and unfathomable stomachs, give it a read. Typical of the genre an OP system is put inside the mc's head by a mad god prior to a migration to a new world. A great time sink and a fun read.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

lets_get_this_rice
4.1
83 Chs

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lets_get_this_rice
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Thank you very much for the review even though it may not have been to your liking! ;) I really appreciate it!

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I gave an honest opinion without being a turd. It is well written,it is very much in line with other novels like it. Each novel is a meal. A chicken fried steak is a chicken fried steak anywhere. However the gravy at each diner is going to be a little different but still gravy.

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