Review Detail of ciaoqiu in Change the Fate of the Cannon Fodder (BL)

Stopped at around chapter 6. All in all, this story isn't really bad; it's just not something I'm all that interested in. Let's go through what I liked first. I thought it was interesting that the MC had trouble experiencing emotions, which made him quite apathetic and perhaps a bit oblivious. It's new (at least for me) and I haven't actually seen that in any of the webnovels I've read. I also liked the System's reactions to both the MC and the things that people think about him. She's a funny System, though her character seems slightly forced. I also liked how we get a full understanding of the original plot of each world; however, it's always in such long paragraphs that might seem a bit troublesome to go through. Maybe if it was separated into smaller paragraphs rather than these huge chunks, it would seem like less of a chore to read. Now, on to the things that aren't as great... first off, the quality: the grammar and punctuation is just okay, as far as I can tell. There are mistakes in every chapter, but I think you can ignore those. It can get a bit tiring when you read that in addition to the weird and forced characterization of the characters though. The characters always seem a bit exaggerated and odd to read about, especially the System and, in the first arc, the villain (or the original female lead). Right off the bat, I could tell that the female lead couldn't be called anything but an unreasonably stupid and vengeful cannon fodder villain. Some people might be okay with these types of rigid roles, or heck, even really like reading about them, so don't let my words discourage you from reading this if you really do like/tolerate these characterizarions. Another thing that struck me as odd was how the male lead just seemed so taken by the MC on their first meeting. All that happened was that they met, MC behaved respectfully, and left. And then the male lead wanted to learn everything about him, which... okay, maybe I'm being a bit too critical for a fictional story, but the pacing and development seems too off for me to fully enjoy. Idk, maybe the MC's protagonist halo is just too strong and makes everyone (except for the cannon fodder villains) love him. Again, if these things are right up your alley, don't let my review stop you from reading it; it's just my opinion.