Review Detail of KURO_DONO in Draga of the Vanguard

The story is interesting has intriguing characters, I feel though that the writer is not as literate as they can be, I don’t know if English is their second language and if so I think they are doing a pretty marvellous job so far, with only somewhat minimal spelling errors and the slight overuse of be word ‘though’ in some chapters. The world in this novel is not particularly well explained, I don’t know if the writer is slowly explaining the world or may have skipped this part as some novels clearly and precisely explain about the world that the character knows about so far, but otherwise, I feel that there is a slight lack of explanation about the MC and his family at the start, as I feel it may be missing any introductions that feel needed. The depictions of characters is what I feel needs a bit of work on, with both the literacy in which you can describe them as well as any information that the reader may feel intrigued by knowing whether the info be arbitrary or not, also depending the appropriateness of the information that you are telling the reader (from the viewpoint and memory of the MC of course). Last and not least, it would be good to maybe somehow spice up the novel a bit if you want it to be unique, of course with it being totally your choice and I am of course not saying it’s not unique and all, I’m just saying that a little creativity never hurt no one. And speaking from experience of reading on this app for an average of 1600 mins per week, I usually tend to always keep up with those more unique stories unlike the already well know concept ones... danm sorry about the amount of words but yeh. Love the story anyway and I hope you keep up the sweet work!!