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Review Detail of FEARME in Draga of the Vanguard

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FEARME
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The first chapter made my heart break like why would this happen, and when he said am going to hunt dragons, I was ok. Aside from the Mc try making the other characters more 3d. Right now I feel like there just there to help the Mc and if they r make them have there own morals and stuff. I was a nice read, I have one eye open on it so am awaiting your next chapter.

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Draga of the Vanguard

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Okay. I'll try and flesh out the side characters even more! Even though I should also work on my world! But I shall do my best! Super saiyan mega x t4 ultra instinct kaioken 100!