Alright, so the novel is good so far, apart from the wall of text with some useless details, you've got ah... May something but her name hasnt got anything related to the clan agrios thing (i cant remember what it was) unlike Draga Rei, the story (up to end of chapter 4) i'd say there pretty much isnt anything i can see other than the mc staying holed up unless is this supposed to be a training arc? The characters arent really explained except minor details like this guy has brown hair, blue eyes and a muscular build and the world background doesn't seem to have much depth, be good if it had more detail (not too much like a wall of text tho lol) apart from these things the quality is good with some possible improvements and the update seems stable, good work and i hope you can make a great novel out of this
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