Review Detail of ihateyounot in A GLITCH in Another World

As of my review, only two chapters have been posted; not really much I have to get off on. The writing is... not unreadable, I guess. I was reading properly in the beginning, but I just skimmed through the last few paragraphs. It needs a little work. The format feels more like a visual novel without the graphics. You know, those texts you read when you play a visual novel game (like Doki Doki Literature Club, to name one)? As the author has said in one of the random Author's Notes in the middle of the second chapter, the first few chapters were meant as an introduction, and apparently is not the main story, If the author had not specified that, I would have roasted them for being too rushed and abrupt. (Tip: instead of breaking readers' immersion in the story, why don't you use the Author's Note box feature? Or leave the explanation at the end so people won't be annoyed. By people, I meant me) Nevertheless, I'll give you a four stars rating so you won't be too discouraged. Giving a bad rating for a novel with only two chapters is a bit too harsh for me. Do your best, good luck!