The beginning of the story resembles a kids writing, world background doesn't really make sense, the usual cliche antagonists who are sick in the head or suffered severe trauma. Redundant sentences for word count etc. Still an ok read if u can skim through it and ignore the grammar as it's not the author first languge. There is a gradual increase in quality of writing if you continue long enough.Read when you have nothing else
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LIKEThanks For The review! I agree with you about the writing in the first few chapters resembling a child's writing, this is my first time writing something like this. I just said yolo and wrote the first chapter haha. Anyways, I thank you for your honest opinion, I will try even more to improve my writing but I do recommend reading a bit further to get the world-building part. From what WN shows me, You've only read 4 chapters and already complain that the world background makes no sense. Well, thanks for reading anyways and stay safe in these times!