Review Detail of Griffin789 in Monster Integration

I totally understand that the writer's first language isn't English, but even with an editor helping, starting at chapter 36, there are a ton of errors that are very confusing. I end up skimming entire paragraphs to just get the outline of things. I do like the uniqueness of the world and can tell it's very thought out. I'm only about 45 chapters in and the main character isn't super interesting, but I expect he develops more because of his future plans. It's a decent novel but needs more attention to detail with the actual writing because it creates confusion.