Review Detail of GooseOverlord in Monster Integration

Twins also got by central continent so there is no chance for them now

Just one of the many flaws in the book. I dropped it, there’s little thought put in this book. Let’s start with why did MOM and DAD pick the same useless monster, both of their families chose to handicap them with this useless thing, it makes no sense. You need to consider things from the point of view of the world. If for example the mutated silver fire sparrow had latent silver Phoenix genes and the way to unlock said genes was through the special refiner then I could accept his choice. What’s Sarah’s motivation for hating the MC, from her POV the MC is an idiot for hamstringing himself sure, but he has perseverance. Shit he saved her life, it makes no sense. I’ve read good stories where Authors mess with their MC but usually the bad things make sense to the world and the story. This just doesn’t make sense. At the start it seemed like that circulation method was unorthodox, people weren’t able to use it due to the pain. Seemed like the author wanted to paint the MC as someone with uncanny perseverance and mental fortitude. This was cool, even though he was painted as somewhat of an idiot for his partner choice. The story had the makings of a truly epic adventure but it failed miserably. Had MCs research found that the manual refiner been the key to unlocking hidden potential in mutated monsters and the means to using the refiner properly was the torturous circulation methods, then this would of had a start that made sense to the setting. People would under estimate him until his companion evolved. Instead you have this cop-out in terms of miracle fruits, all bad use of plot Armor.