Review Detail of Aita in Monster Integration

A world where everyone can bond with a monster, gaining the most loyal and trustworthy soulmate anyone could wish for. An adventure of a boy who trusted his fate to a mutated sparrow monster, one which is considered one of the lowest level bloodline, hinting lots of hardships about breaking future bottlenecks. Without any background support, relying on their own luck, efforts and on each other they fight their way to the top. The world background is exciting, a little bit similar with “Swallowed Star’s”. There are no problems about updates. The story development and the characters are good. But the grammar is severely lacking. In the first 30 chapters it is barely better than any google translation attempts. Later it becomes better, but it’s still frustrating. The power levels and names are switch or incorrectly written/translated so it is confusing many times, and this is really bad. If at least there would be no such mistakes, the incorrect grammar wouldn’t be so troublesome. And sometimes there is a little lack in connecting descriptions/ parts between some story developments, so this novel will make use of the reader’s fantasy and imagination :) The funny thing is that despite all of these problems/ mistakes, I read all of the published chapters... The story is quite good with lots twists and turns, killing and romance (no harem, thank God, finally another more down to earth fantasy novel - I mean relationships and strength development as much as fantasy can be considered down to earth:) ),so it keeps my interest. If the author can find someone to do a throughout check and correct these problems, it would turn into a very good and enjoyable novel. And I hope the Author won’t drop it halfway, it has a really good potential. So, do your best dear Author!