Review Detail of guidou3 in Monster Integration

I like this story quite a bit, but the grammar is ****. You got an editor, good job! This editor does a ****ed up job, not so good! You still keep him and post these chapters with A LOT of grammar errors, you are a bit of a retard! You go premium and I heard the grammar is still crap... what does that make you? Find your own answer and at least try to fix this problem, I think that without it this novel is interesting and would attract many more readers. Please stop with this half-assed job and write better (you could rework on your grammar and use of "the") (English is not my main language and still this bothers me, I don't even want to fathom how much it annoys others)