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Sullybae
SullybaeLv25yr
2019-04-29 05:42

The writing seems kinda too formal, but apart from that it's all good. Focus on updating more often. And give Wallace more screen time!!! Our Xiao Wei's man needs the spotlight!

CEO's Beloved is Spoiled and Scary!

littlebottle
4.6
23 Chs

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tellynana95
tellynana95Lv6

I just started reading this book and it good so far as the update as been coming and I would like to read more of this story and hopefully it gets better and better as I read it updated soon love it

5yr

Tutulputul
TutulputulLv2

Very nice story. It seems rushed but there is more to it and It's evident. Hope to see more updates. πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ Keep up the good work

5yr
LisaAnaque
LisaAnaqueLv6

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5yr
Katherinekee
KatherinekeeLv15

Nice story please release more chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter please More chapter please daily basis Tq very much Please

5yr
WithJ
WithJLv11

Updates: The update speed seems alright to me. Writing: I think there could be some improvements with respect to the writing style of the author. The author may want to polish up by adding more descriptions to illustrate the character’s trait and appearance rather than just listing adjectives like she is β€œbeautiful, smart, kind, etc”. For example, when describing how β€œhandsome” Wallace is, more descriptions could be added rather than simply saying β€œhe’s beyond the word handsome”. It doesn’t really give readers a concrete picture. Also, consider using one tense past vs present for the story. Characters: I can’t comment much on the characters because there are not enough chapters for me to really see any development as of yet. However, there seems to be a mystery surrounding the FL as she was previously in a coma. Story: I thought the story’s pacing was a little too quick, especially since the chapters were so short. Each scene was barely a few paragraphs and it jumped around quickly. I would suggest slowing down a little more and adding more depth to your writing. World: I believe it’s set in the modern world, so there is not much to comment. Overall, as of this review, there were only about 7 chapters (minus the 3 updates which were just author’s note) so there’s not much I can really comment on with respect to world, character and story design. Although improvements could be made for this story, I can see a potential romance fiction coming out of this. Best of luck to the author!

5yr
Fishy000
Fishy000Lv4

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough*, but moving aside from that, the other characters in the novel are unexpectedly shoved in. No explanation, no back story, no nothing. The story also progressed... how do I say this, SUPER FAST, LIKE, THE SPEED OF LIGHT. Do I look like I’m kidding? If yes, then... NOPE!!!!!!

5yr
LisaAnaque
LisaAnaqueLv6

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5yr
Slntbomb
SlntbombLv6

I just found this beautiful novel and I definitely want to know the mystery behind her memory loss and what really the villains done to our heroine. Please keep updating.

5yr
Haipei
HaipeiLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
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