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KoalaTreeHugger
KoalaTreeHuggerLv55yr
2019-02-03 10:08

It's good but needs some editing. It's a bit difficult to read but still doable. Love the story though. ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

The adventure of my life.

Juggernaut778
4.5
47 Chs

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KoalaTreeHugger
KoalaTreeHuggerLv5

Oops wrong novel

5yr
Juggernaut778
Juggernaut778Author

*everyone present facepalming*

KoalaTreeHugger:Oops wrong novel
5yr
Juggernaut778
Juggernaut778Author

wait how you mistake one novel for another? o.o

5yr
KoalaTreeHugger
KoalaTreeHuggerLv5

Lol. I finished the novel and I thought I went back to novel

Juggernaut778:wait how you mistake one novel for another? o.o
5yr
KoalaTreeHugger
KoalaTreeHuggerLv5

Good book though. Started reading it

Juggernaut778:wait how you mistake one novel for another? o.o
5yr
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