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Juggernaut778Author6yr
2019-01-16 06:47

Completely honest review I'm not a perfect writer, but I'll try to make the story as understandable as possible (I'm not very good at storytelling either) I will try to give life to everyone in the story, I do not like to see only the generic NPC of a game, I want them to also have a life, not only exist for my main character and the other secondary characters. Combat: I will try to make the combat between each character as detailed and understandable as possible and omit some sections in which the main or secondary character continuously kill the same species of a creature so that this scene does not become repetitive and boring. Detail of the world and the surroundings: I want to describe 100% the whole world of heart of the oasis, giving the reader the best capacity to understand the world in which the main character is currently. Quality of writing: speaking sincerely, I'm not very good at writing and may be able to find some errors in the text or even multiple errors, so I will keep abreast of everything. Speed of publication: I will be as fast as possible in terms of publication from one chapter to another, but I have estimated that it will be 1 chapter per day. Thank you for reading. I leave at your discretion how many stars think that this novel should have.

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