Review Detail of Jlax in Reincarnating Into A Fantasy World as an Autonomous Machine Arsenal
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So much bullsh*t, I can't take it anymore. Firstly the mc gets turned into a f*cking human, which is against the point of the story being a machine transported to a fantasy world. Next, the mc gets nerfed by a f*cking big margin, from being able to kill a God with just one shot of his railgun, to being f*cking wrecked by this adventurer party that was prowling around the earlier levels of a f*cking newbie dungeon. After that, mc's personality seems to change from becoming someone who would annihilate an army of ten thousand in the blink of an eye, to some dude who acts like a typical villian, explaining all his bullsh*t plans before having to try to kill his enemy just because him speaking gave them a chance. This is just f*cking retarded.
Reincarnating Into A Fantasy World as an Autonomous Machine Arsenal
MeanRobot
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I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.
The title gives us hints on what the story kinda is so you should have really changed the title to reincarnated into a fantasy world as a awsome killing machine to a human hero/villain pretty much!
MeanRobot:I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.
You should've just changed the title if you're not going with the first idea, sure the first one was kinda edgy with no sense of moral or purpose but it was good in a way, it was original, something a lot of writers and novelists have forgotten/abandoned. Now you're just like any other "boring" writer, you've become the very thing a writer doesn't want to become. Also seems like you're too stubborn to listen to your readers, kinda sad that you were like this, I pray you rewrite or make your first idea a different "true story" rather than what it has become.
MeanRobot:I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.