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Jlax
JlaxLv105yr
2019-08-25 14:47

So much bullsh*t, I can't take it anymore. Firstly the mc gets turned into a f*cking human, which is against the point of the story being a machine transported to a fantasy world. Next, the mc gets nerfed by a f*cking big margin, from being able to kill a God with just one shot of his railgun, to being f*cking wrecked by this adventurer party that was prowling around the earlier levels of a f*cking newbie dungeon. After that, mc's personality seems to change from becoming someone who would annihilate an army of ten thousand in the blink of an eye, to some dude who acts like a typical villian, explaining all his bullsh*t plans before having to try to kill his enemy just because him speaking gave them a chance. This is just f*cking retarded.

Reincarnating Into A Fantasy World as an Autonomous Machine Arsenal

MeanRobot
4.3
22 Chs

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MeanRobot
MeanRobotAuthor

I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.

5yr
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Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

The title gives us hints on what the story kinda is so you should have really changed the title to reincarnated into a fantasy world as a awsome killing machine to a human hero/villain pretty much!

MeanRobot:I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.
5yr
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Lowell_Jamex
Lowell_JamexLv1

You should've just changed the title if you're not going with the first idea, sure the first one was kinda edgy with no sense of moral or purpose but it was good in a way, it was original, something a lot of writers and novelists have forgotten/abandoned. Now you're just like any other "boring" writer, you've become the very thing a writer doesn't want to become. Also seems like you're too stubborn to listen to your readers, kinda sad that you were like this, I pray you rewrite or make your first idea a different "true story" rather than what it has become.

MeanRobot:I guess reading comprehension is not your thing. Sure, the way you read it, to you it must appear that way. I will concede your first point, but the point of the story remains firmly within MY rights, not yours. If you came to read about a futuristic machine with no character and no personality, I am sorry that I disappointed you. Ultimately, maybe halfway through I changed my mind about writing some banal trash that you can find in unlimited supply on sites like these. Either way, I hope you enjoy your next novel.
3yr
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MeanRobot
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The rewrite is called "Autonomous Machine Arsenal: An Evil Machine's War Record". It currently deals with a hard sci fi theme, but there will be a fantasy spin-off after it is done. (It is not very long, in fact, it is almost finished already. Maybe 50% done.) I am only posting it to Royalroad at the moment, and I aim to write quite a bit and hopefully finish it within a week or two. I am sorry for the inconvenience this has caused. I took down the chapters I wrote already because I did not want to mislead new readers into false expectations of what the rewrite is about. It is not fantasy, but rather a serious take on hard sci fi. Once that is done, I will return to the Reincarnation story, and post it right here, from the beginning. You can find the sci fi rewrite here: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/22754/autonomous-machine-arsenal-an-evil-machines-war

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Erosire
ErosireLv5

Honestly, story plummets after killing the goddess. You ruin it by making sommus human! Wtf man. It was really fun when hes a machine, thinking like a machine.

6yr
EyesThatDicernsAll
EyesThatDicernsAllLv5

Everyday, I go through the new novel rankings to see if there are some hidden 'gems' and I don't regret the time I wasted as I found this masterpiece! Keep up the excellent work for I shall put this in my library!😀

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LordRaxtus
LordRaxtusLv14

Read the first page and went to read the second but it wouldn’t load so I removed from library and added it back again but now all the pages are gone no matter how many times I try to refresh... anyone have advice on how to fix this?

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Critical_Kind
Critical_KindLv4

Reveal spoiler

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CelestailStar
CelestailStarLv15

I like these recantation of Mc in machines or spaceship and stuff only read the first chapter but it’s already thrilling!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍😤😤😤😭😭👍👍👍!!!!

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_Alucard_
_Alucard_Lv4

This novel is amazing, I hope this novel would continue and the author would not abandon this novel or else I would go rampage for it. FOR THE ALMIGHTY SOMNUS (MACHINE GOD) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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NeedMoreMilk
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