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PinkCotton
PinkCottonLv55yr
2019-03-09 16:16

This is a very interesting read, I really like the female lead's character. I like how the author has shown that even though she is strong she is not invincible, this makes her feel a bit more human. The only critique i have is the use of grammar, the spellings are correct but there is the improper use of tenses. It doesn't mess with the flow of the story but if you can fix them the reading experience will be that much better. All in all, I would recommend this

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Qianru
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Thank you for the review. I really appreciate this :) I started reading yours and will be reviewing your book soon :D

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Goldmember
GoldmemberLv5

Writing Quality & Stability of Updates 4/5, the rest 1/5. Female MC is an assassin from another world with a dark and harsh past - Check Female MC is super strong, has great cultivation talent but cultivation is ignored and happens in the background with no details or any sense at all - Check Male MC is a dark mysterious exiled prince - Check Male MC has rapey tendencies and claims F. MC as his own - Check Male MC forcefully drags F. MC with him - Check F. MC instantly trusts Male MC even though she claims he is incredibly dangerous. She trusts him for no reason and with no prior precedence whatsoever and plays to his every tune - Check Unreasonable enemy side characters with no personality - Check Story development is just about the most senseless thing I've ever read. F. MC's background and past is completely ignored in regards to anything that would make sense and the novel just follows the most basic formula you've probably already read in quite a few novels. She is an assassin from another world who knows nothing about her current world and what does she do? She enters the Imperial Academy as the most peerless beauty 'EVVVVVVAAAAAR' and of course immediately catches the attention of the dark mysterious prince and **** hits the fan right away. Not to mention she killed a bunch of officials of the Empire, and all of that in only the first 15 days she's been in this new world. And that's like.... the first 3-4 chapters(?). I've based my review on up to chapter 19 and I'm out. Also, the synopsis is a lie. She is neither ruthless nor cunning.

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