Amazing story! I'm new to cultivator stories, so I couldn't say too much on how it compares to similar others. Nor would I want to. What I like about this story is seeing all kinds of shades to the word "strong" that is present in the MC. She's a beauty with a strong demeanor. Strategic and calm in her fighting. The story has that survival game feel, where you're always kept on your toes. As a reader, it's thrilling. This is a story that takes you on a wild ride with a lot of beauties to contend with. I'm keen to see how strong our heroine's heart actually is when a certain beauty starts to knock on it :). I do have one piece of feedback regarding the technical delivery is to be mindful of mix-tensing (combination of past and present tense to a paragraph). Action stories are best kept to past tense, so short sentences can pack a punch when needed. Otherwise, it didn't impact on the flow of reading. I was able to be enthralled and captivated since the narrative is solid. Keep writing.
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Thank you very much. English is my second language and I'm not really good at it. It was unbelievable for me that I've made it this far! Also, your book is great! Readers can vividly imagine what was happening! I hope more readers will find your book! It's a hidden gem!
