Review Detail of ReadingAlchemist in Love at First Kiss

This Story is decent but the poor grammar and languahe are ruining the book. The author stated several times to edit it but he doesn't and instead he focuses on publishing daily. I deopped the story after a short while so I can't say much about it, but the way she falls in love with him is poorly described and just states "love at first kiss" but it was kinda obvious, after all the title states it. All in all if the author really improves the quality of his writing, it should be a good read though .