Review Detail of EIo_Police in Love at First Kiss

Read 3 paragraphs and was not sure what I was reading. Not a single comma, which makes sentences often very difficult to read. And it's mentioned that the MC weighs like 130kg, most of it is fat and not muscles so he can be considered handsome or something like that. Incredibly confusing since regardless of how you put it, it's weird. 130kg of fat on 190cm body height is very very big and you would not be considered handsome. 130 kg muscles on 190cm is huge as well and would look more like some of the strongman or idk. I'll try and complete the first chapter but I can only hope the reading experience becomes better and you don't have to think 5 times what the author wants to tell you.