very good stories . i liked the characters and the grammar was good although some words were ...(where the hell did you find them ?) thats what i though hehe i like what you did really ! now i will go back to reading !! ^_^
MokouFriedChicken
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LIKEthe rating is my honest feeling its not because you did bad your writing style is not what i usually read it felt different for me .
MokouFriedChicken:Glad you liked it. Though the rating's a bit lower than expected, can I at least have a reason as to why? (^^)
A bold move, considering that WN allows authors to delete bad reviews. But I'm not like that. I won't fault readers for giving honest ratings. Word of advice for your future swaps: Give honest criticism while at least keeping your ratings at least above 4. It'll prevent your reviews from at least getting deleted by prideful authors or rating purists. (^^)
Zinni:the rating is my honest feeling its not because you did bad your writing style is not what i usually read it felt different for me .
MokouFriedChicken:A bold move, considering that WN allows authors to delete bad reviews. But I'm not like that. I won't fault readers for giving honest ratings. Word of advice for your future swaps: Give honest criticism while at least keeping your ratings at least above 4. It'll prevent your reviews from at least getting deleted by prideful authors or rating purists. (^^)
No problem. The only thing that would my feelings is if nobody truly enjoys or reads my stuff. I'll always acknowledge different tastes, seeings as I have no delusions that the stuff I write isn't boring to some people.
Zinni:thanks for the advice i am usually very direct i hope i didn't hurt your feeling .